Thứ Sáu, 3 tháng 12, 2010

What makes a successful student life?

In our college, it is easy to know who are successful students because their name are always called on school newscast, written on the board which is used to show name and picture of excellent students. What makes a successful student life? The important reasons have to hard studying and friendliness.

Why hard studying makes a successful student life? People say that " intelligence has to go along with hard studying to promote the full capability of each person"
because we are smart but we are not hard studying as if a precious resource does not exploitation. Besides social activities such as participating in the activities of youth, the school's arts program, summer green campaign, having excellent grades in all subjects are assessed as a successful student. We are students so the most important task try to study well. A high mark result is very useful for us to graduate in time, get a good position at our career in future or win a scholarship to continue our learning higher like master.

the second is friendliness. it means that we are willing to make friend with other students so we can share knowledge, experience, practical skill each other. That is also a pleasant environment to wont to work in group. Modern thought of employers is trending toward person who has skill at working in group. Beside that, having friendly character, we can build up and maintain the relationship between student and teacher. Liking former person, teachers will help us to enrich our knowledge with their large real experience. In some cases, they may commend us to employers who are their friends so the opportunity to be selected higher.

All of students want to be proud of being successful ones. Do they take right way? It's great, studying hard and being friendly, the good things will come with us.

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  1. Language: The important reasons have to hard studying and friendliness--- Subjects, parallel
    because we are smart but we are not hard studying as if a precious resource does not exploitation --- as if?
    MANY LANGUAGE ERRORS
    Development: Why do you mention "Besides social activities such as participating in the activities of youth, the school's arts program, summer green campaign, having excellent grades in all subjects are assessed as a successful student" under the topic keyword: "hard studying"

    Why don't you develop more about" " intelligence has to go along with hard studying to promote the full capability of each person" by some examples and make the connection with "successful student life"

    Second point:ok

    MARK: 6.8

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